een paar tips:
1. ondertiteling, zodat mensen die een andere taal spreken het ook begrijpen.
2. inbetweens, dit ziet er meer uit als een hele ruige animatie, eigenlijk zou je inbetweens moeten doen (de tussenstappen animeren)
(DUTCH) Dakloos.
March 14, 2010 –June 12, 2015
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
DONT THINK THIS IS RACIST JUST BECAUSE I DREW HIM AS A STEREOTYPE BLACKMAN.
I grew up with black people, and when this guy hang out with me and my friends evreybody called him DARKNESS or simular names. And he would just take it as a bitch. This is just a cartoon about how I and allot of other people see him.
And oyeah, you need to know dutch to understand this shit. holla
Reviews
Goed getekend, maar de plot is niet echt speciaal ofzo.
En dat taaltje is irritant om naar te luisteren.
Maar met graszuigen scoor je wel de punten. :P
This was actually a decent animation, the artwork was incredible, and the animation was decent aswell, it was kinda confusing wich is why i think "SUBTITLES are greatly needed" but besides that i highly enjoyed and was entertained as im sure many others are.
Add some subtitles it will greatly help on this
~X~
Your author's comments are in english, but your flash is in dutch without any subtitles. Bad decision. At least your art is alright.
I want that song.
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- Score
- 2.39 / 5.00