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Hey look, i'm still alive. to answer any further questions, yes this is going to be a series.
good story line but slow down the story intro some
seems like a interesting story line but I agree with other users, the cartoon should be sped up a bit, however slow down the time that the story is up, had to restart the cartoon twice to make sure I read the whole story....
It was kinda slow
This animation kinda was slow, but i liked it, im a fan of sci fi stuff and this was right up there the story was my faveourite part you seemed to really put lots of effort into this, so while it was slow it was still a good flash and i thought in the end it was a fantastic entry.
Things to improve? speed up the animation and story, dont drag it on.
Early Bird wasn't clear
Like the flash and the story was beginning to be more interesting. Are you gonna make this as a series? Can't wait for the continuation!
Spiffy...music is rather familiar
The music is a nice score to animate to, I'll give you that. I re-watched this piece 3 times hoping to get a little more out of it, but ultimately still feel like there's a lot more that should have been handed over to the viewer.
As mentioned, the music has that desired introductory weight and suspense to it - problem for me was that it cut out and back in too sharply, leaving parts of the movie without any sound at all... as if the score was simply "thrown in" as opposed to being an integrated part of the animation.
Graphics were... all right. It's not the art that was my biggest issue, it's trying to decipher what story is being passed along FROM the art. Evidently it has something to do with outer space, Earth, re-creation, robots maybe, a big white flash, and the term "evolutionary horizon". I think.
Does it look like this *could* be cool? Sure, why not. It really hasn't hit me as an "Ooo must-see!" later on, because it appears to be a random sampling of fragments from what will be the main body of work.
Giving you a 7 because it looks like you spent some time on this - I'd like to see the finished story / episode when done, so I can maybe make sense of your efforts.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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