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first submitted flash. that says it all, really!
*thanks for the feedback, i'd agree with all of ya (cept for the detail part).
still figuring out what i'd like to do with flash.
what the heck was that giant thing at the end?
I see you've put alot of effort in making this short movie. It's quite good "painted" for being from newgrounds, but the story lacks... something that attracts. Kudos for the parody clip from a space odyssey :P
Not a bad first submission.
Since this is your first flash, I wont be too critical, but just know that maybe some more detail in close up shots, like shading(or at least more of it to discern objects).
Otherwise, this was actually funny, keep it up!
Holy crap, that was awesome.
Better intro/ending screens are my only complaint.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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