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Madness has gone mini.
Yes i know its short, but i got impatiant way to quick. well i hope you injoy it anyway.
if you like it i will make another, but it is probaly to short. or well. who cares.
If you want to give me ideas on how to improve it please pm me.
no is serious: what the **** is that??????? i HATE IT!
the first chapter was really nice, but my favorite one was the part near the end of chapter 8 of this epic journey
I liked this!!!
i want more!!!!!! ;[
hate cliff hangers
How much work did this take?
That's a serious question (I guess it should be pm'd). It looked like everything was there for a decent cartoon, it just needed more time. The illustration was fine. The animation was a little stiff and a little fast, like it was on x2. But also fine.
Why include that whole song? I'm listening to it as I type this, and I think I'm going crazy.
There are some other things that could be done to touch this up, but they're relatively unimportant. If you are going to finish this, it should all be one file, and the pacing should be worked out differently. Then you can focus on the extra bits, like the intro and ending screens, transitions, detail, camera angles, whatever.
(I really liked the purple brain matter. Nice touch.)
It felt like a first draft that had potential.
I didn't take to much work, but i spend a lot of time on newgrounds, and to homework, going to school, all that stuff.
not bad, you should consider to make a bigger one.
it is all pretty good, but I think a longer movie is way better. the animations are going very swift, but the story fits, I give you that much. and only one last thing, your drawing may need some refining, especially the lines around the characters. because they're to thick.
but after all, your story is well thought, and it looks quite cool. so keep this up. I definitely see something in you.
Thank you, i will keep that in mind. Personly i like the think wonky lines.
A short film about a park bench
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