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Ok, this project is kinda emberasing and a bit of a rush project done for class. Pardon my horrid...everything.
Special thanks to my Brother for the music, the only part that isn't bad.
good and bad
what i liked:
it had a story
dialogue, sound effects were all present and in sync
the art was decent, but not great
what i didn't like:
the music was too loud in relation to the sound effects and speech
the scene with the pig talking took too long, and i got bored and left, later I cam back though, but i stil have not finished it because it is too slow for me.
Overall: I can tell you put a lot of work into it. and you have all the elemnts of a great flash, it's just the way it was paced ruined it for me.
Thanks for the advice on pacing and sound.
I'll keep that in mind if I do another short.
The humor was okay. So was the action. But the mouth job was choppy and the movie goes into a loop.
It's pretty good but the music is a little loud which makes it difficult to hear what's being said and a play button would be nice to have next time, although I understand that it was a class project so it won't be great.
that was funny amd the animation was pretty good, the music reminded somewhat of playing an old beat-em-up game like golden axe or something, lol
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