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A cartoon consisting of short segments. I can work on it better if I don't have to listen to the whole thing over and over again.
I thought of all the jokes on my own.
Thanks to my internet friend Scotty for the extra voice part.
Very entertaining. I loved the characters and the voices. :P A few things I think you need to work on are: Lip Syncing and coloring. xD I can give you a link on how to lip sync but as for coloring: TO KINDERGARTEN WITH YEE! D:< :D Well I'm glad to have come across this flash. The voice reminds me of Wonchop's or maybe Ed from Edds worlds o: Cheers mate,
Jack. ^_^ (Check out my profile or reply to this :D)
I remind you of Ed(d) from Eddsworld? My mood is much improved.
Haha well you got a fan here the lack of color was a downer but you covered that with some good and fast humor that gives a good laugh, i kinda like it simple and black and white it adds to the humor.
My suggestions would be to maybe add a touch of color, and make it longer, hope i have helped you somewhat here
That was quite awesome and easy to undestand english but what the hidden message?
What hidden Messavote5/5ge? I alrvote5/5eady said that thevote5/5re is no such thing as subvote5/5limvote5/5inal mesvote5/5sages.
Random, but cool...
The segments were funny and original. Your animations for the last two segments were great. The first four were a few frames too short. The voicing was good as well. You have talent. I'll be interested to see what other flashes you'll make.
Thanks. Just wait 'til Lack of Attention Span 2: Because I drink too much caffeine!
This was good in the sense of "Attention Diverted"
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