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Mar 9, 2010 | 8:50 PM EST

Author Comments

A cartoon consisting of short segments. I can work on it better if I don't have to listen to the whole thing over and over again.
I thought of all the jokes on my own.
Thanks to my internet friend Scotty for the extra voice part.

Reviews


LegendarySleuthLokiLegendarySleuthLoki

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 11, 2010

Heh

Very entertaining. I loved the characters and the voices. :P A few things I think you need to work on are: Lip Syncing and coloring. xD I can give you a link on how to lip sync but as for coloring: TO KINDERGARTEN WITH YEE! D:< :D Well I'm glad to have come across this flash. The voice reminds me of Wonchop's or maybe Ed from Edds worlds o: Cheers mate,
Jack. ^_^ (Check out my profile or reply to this :D)


weinerking404 responds:

I remind you of Ed(d) from Eddsworld? My mood is much improved.


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 10, 2010

Haha entertaining

Haha well you got a fan here the lack of color was a downer but you covered that with some good and fast humor that gives a good laugh, i kinda like it simple and black and white it adds to the humor.

My suggestions would be to maybe add a touch of color, and make it longer, hope i have helped you somewhat here

~X~



zenlazenla

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 10, 2010

heh

That was quite awesome and easy to undestand english but what the hidden message?


weinerking404 responds:

What hidden Messavote5/5ge? I alrvote5/5eady said that thevote5/5re is no such thing as subvote5/5limvote5/5inal mesvote5/5sages.


Mushroom17Mushroom17

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 9, 2010

Random, but cool...

The segments were funny and original. Your animations for the last two segments were great. The first four were a few frames too short. The voicing was good as well. You have talent. I'll be interested to see what other flashes you'll make.


weinerking404 responds:

Thanks. Just wait 'til Lack of Attention Span 2: Because I drink too much caffeine!


alexduuualexduuu

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 9, 2010

Nice!

This was good in the sense of "Attention Diverted"