Well, I have finally finished this, after months of work, and also of trying to keep diligently working on this, I finally completed it.
I actually finished just a few days ago, but had to wait for a few things.
I was commissioned by my former Science Teacher, Mr. Kievit, to do a music video for one of his old band's songs. I've been doing a back and forth comic with him for almost 3 years now, for all of middle school, so I took this as an opportunity to put a few in-jokes between the two of us in, so you might not completely understand a few things, like the main Antagonist's reason, if any, for his design.
Please don't try to find any secret meaning between the video and the song, the lyrics are mostly unrelated, though I tried to loosely base the movie around cigarettes (though they aren't necessarily used in the correct sense)
It's hard to explain what to expect, it's nothing crazy random or super silly, but it isn't necessarily senseful and realistic, just watch :D
Please don't rate low because of the slightly negative message towards cigarettes, I kind of had to use them in this way so Mr Kievit wouldn't get in any trouble if the school finds out.
Rate fairly, my good friends (and I usually understand critiques, and am usually already aware of them, so I know this isn't perfect) and enjoy.
Comments and critique would be wonderful, as well :D