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Mar 8, 2010 | 8:23 PM EST

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This is my first flash animation. I made it for a year long school project, but I decided to put more effort in it than the necessary, discovering that I liked flash.

Comments and/or advices would be greatly appreciated.


thanks for all theses reviews and this awesome score!
I will make other flashes for shure...



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Ew, but good

As a first attempt, pretty friggin tight. The sketch drawings put into a flash thing works. The story flows and makes for a believable and interesting twisted ending. Tres bien, mon ami. Keep it up! Bon chance with your next works.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good

this is very good for your first flash, keep up the good work!

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feels good man


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Neet concept. one quick question:

It looks like you were drawing right onto the screen or something, what did you use to do that? is it just one of those touch screen computers?

good art
good concept
fairly smooth animation
ill say 8/10.

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lespringatomic responds:

I used a bamboo pen tablet and I made all my drawings on Photoshop.

That's why it looks sketched.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome cant believe is your first one!

Is really awesome you got a lot of talent believe me!

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