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This is my first flash,minigx13 is my username on Youtube.Credit to the following Alejo, Dazz,Fret, ifureadthisdie for awesome tutorials and the creator of Dbz,Akira Toriyama.
I know alot of people dislike GIF animation but i love it. You put it together fairly well. good for your first anyway. just make your next one longer. remember you can always add more. add some story to it, or more characters and it will be worthy of a 10/10.
For a first time, not bad at all, now just try pre-loader or get rid of the loop. But it's sprites, but still good for that too.
It was OK
Fix the loop
The animation is decent, and i liked the attention you gave to the sound, but the constant grunting and smashing noises made it really difficult to listen to. plush there shouldnt be a loop on this. But like i said: the animation isnt below par, work on the sound though, seriously.
Not bad at all!
Very good for your first flash. Perhaps if you added in a story or just some dialog it would've been better. Keep it up
A story about finding your true calling.
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A young artist trapped in a boring job uses his imagination to escape from reality.
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