When is the rest of the episodes going to be uploaded to Newgrounds. Ihate to see a good job go to waste all for nothing. YOU TRULY ARE A MASTER OF STORYTELLING. THE STORY MUST GO ON.

One of My Favorites!

I wish there was some way I could download these!!! XD

Now THIS is a well deserved Daily Feature!

Oh wow awesome work man! Markedly improved quality between each chapter. It's only a matter of time (practice lol) that your quality will rival that of mainstream anime movie quality.

I'm also digging the story. Got me into it big time. Its so rare for a flash movie in NG to really hook me deep like this.

You got something REALLY GOOD HERE

Kudos and keep on making this great story shine.
5/5 - 10/10
CIAO
-MD

good improvement.

The voice-overs got much better. It still needs more work, you need to add more emotion! Not necessarily raising your voice, but a lot more passion, they need to sound fluid.
Don't just read the character's lines, imagine yourself as the character, having their personality traits, their value systems. When pretending you are a certain character, ask yourself: when I hear someone say something a certain way, how does that sound to me?
What's my disposition to them, what's going on around me? Is he attacking/strengthening me with words? Do I even know he's trying to? And what tone and strength do I want to reply with to get the right message across?

You're going places!

I've just started watching this series, and I have to say, your animation and proportions really improved. The only prob I have is that at certain parts, the voices cut off a little too early. But, besides that, awesome job!