It's well, alright. Good for a first, that's all I can say.

Well...

It's good. It maybe needs to be a little bit longer and it will need some work. Well. I like it though. Keep up the work in Chapter 2 though :)

learn to flash

you NEVER upload a first anything, that way it wont get trolled :)
unless you have an epic first like con artist

lqtm

thats one way to make me laugh

BAD!!!

i dont know what you guys are playing but all i played was a one button game nothing more and it was done in 30 seconds its not hard its not challenging and it just plain and simple sucked!!! you need to beef it up a little you know give him a gun or something