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Mar 7, 2010 | 1:59 PM EST

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hey! ok...max super is a character of mine, i know he's not much of a picasso drawn but he's charismatic xD, i know elax can be a cliche name, but i created him when i was like 4 so i don't care, deal with it...please comment helpfully and help doing better flash ^^
anyway...that's it xD
sam.

Reviews


HotfurteacherHotfurteacher

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Let´s take a look

6/7
1. Grammar: work on it
2.Movement: it looked mork like a story book
3. audio: come on!! add some music brotha, get our groove on!
4.Fluency your frames need more movement. in other words.. ADD MORE FRAMES!!!!

oh by the way i love your story. and dont let haters bring you down!!!


sirsamy145 responds:

wow, thanks :), i'll do my best, and im happy you liked it, be on the look cuz max super is invading newgrounds!!! xD


Spac3case916Spac3case916

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

hmmm...

it's not really animation.
the art isn't bad though.
and i like that you alteast added a story to it.


sirsamy145 responds:

thanks :)


FedoManFedoMan

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Well

It was ok. There was hardy any sound, color, background, or movement. The story is sort of interseting though. If you work on your animation you can get a soild series


sirsamy145 responds:

thanks, that's the idea, i got a lot of comics that im planning to enter into flash so yeah i hope people like them, thanks ^^


SlightlyToastedSlightlyToasted

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Well,

I can appreciate your enthusiasm on story telling, and your liking to invent your own characters and tell a story.. But the drawings.. haha as you refer yourself, "not much of a Picasso drawn". Your grammar could improve too, but that doesn't matter as much as the rest. As for the animation, I'm not gunna hate because it wasn't good, I assume you are a beginner on flash and just figuring things out, so I only encourage you to go on and do more.

Good luck with your future projects! And remember, practice makes perfect.


sirsamy145 responds:

wow thanks, i really apreciate it, and yeah i will practice more :)


FloriankunFloriankun

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Max Super!!!

I like it but you should have made music to the introduction the music afterwards is nice and i think Max Super is a funny name!


sirsamy145 responds:

xD thanx, yeah i was supposed to put music on but i forgot ¬¬