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Rix fighting crime with his trusty sword at his side
i like it
i liked the music...but the movie is a crap...sorry))) however 5/10 and 5/5
I find the story pretty unoriginal... Having the main characters parents killed is the most ever used storyline, I think... You should try to make it more interesting by introducing the characters in your movie more.
I do like that you tell us the story with small cut scenes and text explaining what happens, but I think you could improve the graphics from just simple stick figures and maybe make better looking text. From the looks if it now, It feels like you threw this together over a day. Really good flash movies often takes over a week to finish, even more sometimes.
An animation it was
You had the basis of a story happening and some nice planned out movement. I found the music to be a little out of place here; it gave me the mental picture of a bunch of college kids laying around smoking weed.
You should give voice over a try instead of using text to explain the story. Maybe do the voices for the characters instead of trying to explain their actions. Don't worry if you don't think you're a good voice actor - no one was when they first started out.
Some color in the characters and backgrounds along with some more detail would be good too.
My opinion would be to focus on making your artwork and animation more detailed/put together instead of moving on to doing more of them. Quality over quantity will always prevail. Learn the basics and build your way from there. It doesn't matter how great of a story you think you've come up with, you won't be able to get it across effectively if your animation isn't up to snuff.
I give you a 5 because it actually kept my attention and the song was great, maybe you should write the story and have someone draw it. Oh yeah and do away with the hair it is too Dragonball like...you know super saiyan and all.
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A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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