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Ok,this animation is pure effort.
It took me few weeks to make this.
Not crappy and short.
P.S.Please don't blam this.
EDIT:Oops!!!Forgot to add a preloader!
It wasn't that bad, and I can tell that some effort was put into this flash! I am a fan of stick animations, especially fighting/combat stick animations; your movie was pretty enjoyable to. It reminded me of "Xaio Xaio", which made me even think higher of this animation.
Although the movie wasn't bad, I do have a few suggestions. Next time, remember to insert the pre-loader! It always is nice to have the option to replay the movie, rather having it on a continuous loop. Also, your sounds were pretty good quality, just have a wider selection of sounds rather than the same ones over and over again. Your animation wasn't to bad, but needs a little work. Try to make the stickmen have a smoother tweens and motion when fighting.
Above all nice job, and I hope to see more! Great work!
Wow,thanks!Part2 will have smoother animation,awesome preloader,more sounds,oh and yeah,combat animations will be better.
P.S.I use FBF not motio tweens.
The visuals were a little rough and I wish there was a preloader, but this wasn't too bad. You show alot of promise
I really apreciate your review!Part2 is coming!
Hey, not bad!
Well, It's not bad, but there's something lacking that I just can't pinpoint. Maybe It's the fact that there's not a preloader. Or maybe it would be cooler if there was a plot or a story line. Not sure, but not too bad.
Heh,part 2 will reveal the hidden plot line.
This aint bad.
The animation quality isn't the best, but I can really tell you put a lot of effort into this. If I had to give some advice I'd say try to make the movements a little more fluid next time. Still, very good job. It's nice to see new artists actually putting in effort.
Thanks for an awesome tip!!!
Thank you for reviewing this!!!
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