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This is a bad flash, bad animation, bad texts, bad sounds, funny george carlin, and bad use of children in costume's getting raped.
BUT I did like how there was an actual story, seeing as it was based on a story, but still you portrayed it in this flash. Now seeing as it was a flash for school, a bunch of the text flew by too quick to even read. Now I know you could do better than this and I could also see you using the same type of animation to make a really hilarious flash.
Make that flash, and put it up on this site, and keep on working hard if this is what you really want to do because in no time, you will be doing really good work,
I know the story behind the animation, but..
that is still no excuse for such a poor animation. The story was poorly executed, the characters were inappropriate (children in Halloween costumes? It would have been slightly funny if it weren't for the fact that The Wife of Bath involves rape), and the overall quality was just bad in general. Kudos to you if you get an A, but please make an actual attempt next time.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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