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Mar 3, 2010 | 7:49 PM EST
  • Daily 3rd Place March 4, 2010

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This is my final animation project for Commtech 30. I got 100% on it. It's only about two minutes, but my teacher was blown away and put it on loop. She even took it home to show other people.

If this is given a high enough score when it comes out of judgement, I'll make a sequel to it! :)

Altogether, the whole thing took about 24 hours, but spanned over a month because I mainly worked on it in class. Enjoy my day's labor guys. hahaha.

Reviews


GalaBlueGalaBlue

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 22, 2010

that was really cute.

that was adorable and so gentle. i loved it.


pickletoez responds:

Thanks! :)


Kakigori-KittenKakigori-Kitten

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 14, 2010

Amazing

I LOVE this animation. Very cute with a lot of personality. I'd love to see a sequel!


pickletoez responds:

Don't worry, there will be! :)


LecxLecx

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 27, 2010

simples e lindo

achai bem bunitinho foi fofinho como ela ficou vermelha achai siples e lindo ao mesmo tempo


pickletoez responds:

Exactly.


yodaman132yodaman132

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 12, 2010

Very good.

Honestly, I came here because I thought this was a game. LOL

I think that you diserve that 100% on this project. The character creation was just wonderful. I found myself getting to know the female sprite, with her reactions and everything. It started showing the boy and I was curious as to what would happen, but it ended right there. It felt like I was when I watched the first LotR movie and at the end when Froto and sam were aboutu to move on, it said "to be continued."

The experience is being so engaged in something and then being forced out of it, wanting more.

I hope that a sequal happens.


pickletoez responds:

Muaah ha ha haaa! I have trapped you. Now I guess I should get back to work. Thanks for the awesome comments!


KirbyfemurKirbyfemur

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 12, 2010

A good start

Congrats on your 3rd by the way.
What it needs, is development of the characters. Give them a reason to love each other, rather than just love at first sight.

Maybe give the a rather large obstacle to overcome. Something like, they can't leave their flower, or they would wither away.

Or a diver takes the guy away(Or girl, i say guy just to give a change in heroic pace as far as what sex is the hero)

Or bring in another love intrest, and create a love triangle, and develope a story as to how the first two would end up together.

Or give us a good little love story, but one that tries to avoid using to many love cliches.

But give is people who we actually want to care for. Make us sad when they're sad, make us angry when they are angry. Pretty much, just give it as much emotion as you can =3


pickletoez responds:

I responded on the journal post! Thanks!