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One of my best flash entries ever!
Credits song: "Fat People Not Good" - Raveing Lunatics
Haha, fuck you zero bombing cunts :D
How can I start with this....
The beginning of the animation-
I thought in the beginning your animation was nice. Their were some nice little effects and gags in their as well. Then came that part where a cliff rises from the middle of the screen. It looked very unrealistic and its where the animation began to lack.
Then came the rest of the animation. You showed extreme laziness because the FBF in the stick figure became simply horrible. The sticks were all over the place using their proportion, and well...thats where I brought you down a few scores.
Puts some music in as well.
The idea? well, totally unoriginal. If I had a .000001 dollars for ever The Cliff animation, I'd be BillGates.
Thats abit harsh but i guess constructive criticism always help, and i definatly see your point. Though i have no clue what "FBF" is, and the unoriginal idea..Well i guess sometimes making simple, light minded flash movies can be mildly amusing.
A short film about a park bench
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