hmmm..
Ok, I do like your drawing style, nice. The concept was a little random but odd, and I like odd. My major complaint about this video was the sound quality, very scratchy and somewhat inaudible. If you just using a simple mic to record all you voice over and music try turning down the mic voi level in the"volume control" property window. Plus play with the vol of you actors voices (farther distance from mic, use a muffle on the mike(a sock will work, just make sure its clean)) With a few try's I bet you can get better audio on you next movie! GOOD LUCK
