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Yo yo check it, it's Mr. Literal, the first of many monthly toons to come. I hope this one kicks it off to a good start, and I hope you get a few CHUCKLES teehee
terrible is being nice.
i dont know about the fanboys on this site, but i am going to voice a true opinion. i dont give a crud if this review gets removed or rated down, its my opinion.
the colours were nice, but the animation was choppy and it was hard to tell what was happening in some scences. the voice acting sounds EXACTLY the same as 90% of your other works. also the randomness which your known for is boring now, do something new. the ending was not even done properly. ive seen much better flashes get much lower scores and exposure which is unfair. i think your work is seriously slipping, say compared to awesome the hedgehog or price of awesome. also the premise isnt funny enough to warrant the effort of an entire flash animation.
its kinda like you dont give a shit anymore, because you know you can make any piece of crap and the NG fangirls will support you in full force. the same arguments can be applied to the 'anime' parody that you make.
to close, this was not funny at all and it was poorly made.
Hardly any humour... Even thou it is good animation.
Where is the funny Egoraptor?
Sry but this was just lame.
Even the awsome voice acting and nice animation styl could make me laugh this time.
Hopefully you'll reach your old standart wih your next submission.
It's very safe. Considering the usual content of your animation I would've thought you might take this somewhere interesting, but instead you opted for the usual "zany" unjustifiable absurdity. You never surprise us anymore. Invest in your voice acting a little more, it's sounded the same since the beginning.
I didn't enjoy this at all... it was seriously hard to watch. You have so much talent and i know this is just a short thing but i think you should work on your jokes and rely less on observational humor.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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