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Hi! I'm 11. This is my first animation, it took me 3 weeks. Earlier today a user named thereturnoftomspulp stole this file from my dump and posted it. He stole it. Anyways, hope you like it!
it made it, dude!!! yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know! I'm so excited!
hahha not bad for a 11 at least you made the legs move not bad not bad
Sorry for the last review I sorta jumped the gun there. For an 11 year old this pretty good. Sound effects would make this a little better and nice twist at the end there.
Keep it up dude.
you can still improve on this
I'm 19 and I can't really animate on flash well, so I can tell you got talent. Though, I could still see some elements that you could improve on. Try adding sound to your work, not just the voice. Oh, and a clearer storyline maybe? Points for putting neighbor totoro on your work. I'm interested to see you improve...good luck kid.
thanks for the review. it's really motivating. I know there is a lot of stuff to improve. once again, thanks.
well, if you really are 11 this is a nice little first flash : )
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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