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2nd of 4 new shorts. This one is a bit cryptic but I hope you'll enjoy.
Frontpage! That came completely unexpected! Thank you very very much...
You have a very innovative animation style that portrays the plot of this movie rather well. I thought the pacing in it was a bit too slow and that made a big problem with it that made this cartoon a lot less enjoyable. The movie itself was very hard to understand but it was still somewhat inspiring and pleasing. The biggest problem this really had was just that it was so short. But other than that you did a great job. I'd love to see you animate something like this thats a bit more complicated though.
Thank you very much:)
It was never meant to be more than a short movie and it only took about a week to animate. I'm doing this series of shorts in order to try out different ideas and have some fun. I usually spend months and months on my movies, so you could say that these short ones are a bit of fresh air. I've got some pretty big stuff coming after I've submitted all 4 of them by the way.
I really like your drawing style and the animation of him walking. I don't really understand it but you did say it was cryptic. Overall it was pretty good.
Thank you. Believe it or not, but that is actually the first proper walk cycle I've ever done, so I am quite proud of it.
I wish you had turned the sound effects on the ocean down a little lower.
I think you're developing your abilities.
Thanks for the review. Working with sound FX is something I've never really done before, so this was a valuable experience.
i voted 4
i gave it a4 for its artistic skills and sound,but it dosent make any sence
It is a cryptic film and I am very much aware of that fact, but here is a little hint that might help you out: What might happen when you sleep?
I don't quite understand it, but then again I'm not really the artsy type. The Animation quality's good. (especially the background)
Though my art style is kinda rough I do spend quite some time on the backgrounds, so I'm glad they are liked.
A short film about a park bench
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