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Feb 27, 2010 | 4:54 PM EST

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Third flash movie. yay.

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TinyPinkTamponTinyPinkTampon

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 27, 2010

Awesome

got work mate!


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Spartan00222Spartan00222

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 27, 2010

my criticism

thru the first part of it i was kind of getting tired of the voice over, but there was a nice twist at the end. I think with a little more work this could turn out to be a good movie. All in all this wasnt all that bad just the first part of it gets a little annoying, you could try to adjust the sound to make the emotion in the voice more pronounced.

theres my 2 cents


Death-By-Avarice responds:

That's what I was afraid of. If I try to do something like this again it will be a shorter intro. Thanks


GoofyGoober2GoofyGoober2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2010

u got me

i really thought that it was some intense poem about the end of the world. hahaa, but it was about soup lol.



AK907BlazinAK907Blazin

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 27, 2010

Nice dude

made me laugh at the end
total surprise ending haha
improve your animation skills
and youll be makin front pages in no time


Death-By-Avarice responds:

Front page with work eh? All I'm aiming for is an average of 4 . Thanks for watching it to the end


danceforeverxdanceforeverx

Rated 2 / 5 stars February 27, 2010

hmmm

i think youve tryed to do something like kintetuc typeography. if so . type it into youtube and see some good stuff. take tips like using angled writing and adding actions to letters .. makes it more interesting. try using film script or something . it makes it m,ore effective


Death-By-Avarice responds:

I take it you stopped before the end?