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I've been working with my partner Spy on this comic thing, so I made an opening theme.
The comic is basically two old guys who go on an interdimensional road trip to find a little girl who probably doesn't exist. There are also giant bug people and man-eating lamps.
Here's the comic: http://prosarch.smackjeev es.com/
I liked it. :) Link to the comic?
I would have sex with this
Its kinda weird but in a way very, dark comic. and also resembles an acid trip..
i liked the art :)
the comics are pretty much good but the music dont suits the game....
for me you can pass :)
This is just a bunch of pics.
Absolutely no animation whatsoever going on, which is grounds that can get this blammed.
Secondly, a pic or two in this submission should have made this an 'Adult' rated submission. (One shows a woman almost entirely naked, save for some areas missing pieces of flesh.)
Instead of just making a montage of several pictures go along with a song, why not just have them be animated? That would boost my score and would make this more of an animation than a series of pics.
Hopefully you can improve and take some of my advice. On a positive note, many of the pictures were very nice, and with artistic talent like yours animating them shouldn't be too much of a challenge.
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