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UPDATED: June 08,2010
Animated from FLASH, background with PHOTOSHOP, effects and editing with AFTER EFFECTS, and add 3D objects with 3Ds max. this is my 5th flash/second submission and i will try even harder next animation project.
You need a good story to start with
You need something to write about, to animate. To do. If you have no concept, no matter what you do, it will result in a half-assed movie :(
next project.i will,.. no.. we will.
You should have just ended it at the dream, the last part was stupid and unnecessary. Work on your story board before you post the actual video. Other than that, good work.
it's a warning.if i end this with a happy ending,maybe the warn will be neglected.
It's really obvious that you put a lot of effort into this. The expressions of the cat are endearing, and then sad. I have to say, I'm not a huge fan of tear-jerker endings. To me, it was an odd closing of the tale. But hey, I'm just one observer. Overall, great work.
Evocative and fun
I like this piece, especially the deeper meaning of how you've played along with the curious nature of the cat and how it pursues the butterfly across the scenes. I think that you would have benefited more from a wider ranging study of feline mannerisms, as you would have been better off with it curling up into a ball, opening one eye lazily and then considering waking up for starters, possibly with the "hunter's crouch" when it starts to stalk the butterfly.
It was a shame that the video quality couldn't match up with the rest of the quality of the flash, since I tried to expand it, which wasn't possible, since it cost a lot in the picture quality, even with the lights dimmed, which was a shame. You've done a great job with the 3D stuff, so please continue to work at that and give is some more great works :)
Other than that, the last part could have done with some voice acting, since speech bubbles are a little primitive nowadays.
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i'll try hard next project.
*sob*that was*sob*so buetiful*cry*ummm could somone lend me a hankee?
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