Cool
Drawing was great but as others said voice acting needs work.
Author Comments
HERE'S THE FIRST & SECOND EPISODE OF MY "ZELDA" ANIME, "THE LEGEND OF ZELDA: ORACLE OF SECRETS" RE-ANIMATED. COPYRIGHT OF "ZELDA" BELONGS TO SHIGERU MIYAMOTO, AND "NINTENDO." HONEST RESPONCES ARE WANTED. I ALSO FIXED THE RANDOM APPEARENCES OF WHITE PROBLEM. XD. IF ANYONE WANTS TO BE A NARRATOR, POSITIONS ARE OPEN. RIGHT NOW, I NEED SOME FEMALE NARRATORS. I'VE GOT A LOT OF MALE NARRATORS. XD.
DARKRYAN responds:
YEAH. TRIAL & ERROR MIXED WITH PRACTICE WORKS WELL. THAT'S WHAT EP. 3 IS FOR. HOWEVER, THAT MIGHT BE A WHILE, DUE TO THE LACK OF NARRATORS. ARIGATOU FOR YOUR CRITIQUE. (^_^).
Not bad.
The concept seems to be interesting, but the animation isn't as good as some on here. Keep practicing and everything will get better, and don't worry just ask nicely and I'm sure other voice actors will be happy to help. keep up the good work.
DARKRYAN responds:
THANKS. I'VE BEEN ASKING EVERYONE, BUT THE ONLY PEOPLE I'VE FOUND ARE 2 OF MY FRIENDS AT MY SCHOOL. XD. AS FOR THE ANIMATING, I'M THINKING OF MAKING EVERYTHING 2-D AGAIN. IT SEEMED TO SLOW THE ANIMATION DOWN ON MY COMPUTER. THAT'S WHY SOME VOICING IS OFF. XD. SO, THANKS FOR YOUR CRITIQUE. (^_^).
well...
The voice acting was terrible. No offense, but there was no emotion, it was all monotone. But, The battle was alright. A few improvements here and there, but I think that's me just being nitpicky.
DARKRYAN responds:
I'M NOT GOOD AT VOICE ACTING, YET. AND YOU AREN'T BEING PICKY. THAT'S ANOTHER FIELD I'VE BEEN WORKING ON. XD. THANKS FOR YOUR CRITIQUE. (^_^).
good quality
however is there any way to brighten dark link's dialog? I can barely read it.
DARKRYAN responds:
MANY PEOPLE THAT I SHOWED IT TO NEVER SAID ANYTHING, SO I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS HARD TO SEE THE TEXT. I'LL BE FIXING IT IN LATER EPISODES, BUT, FOR NOW, I CAN'T. SORRY. (^_^).
Nice Try
wasnt horrible, but it sure could have been smoother, soind syncing needs to be touched up in some places, and also some proportion on the characters would be handy, also in the background, I noticed when dark link threw the blast wave, it went a quarter mile, when he was only a few meters behind regular link, although I do like your attempt at being creative using the forged sword from Zelda: Majora's Mask but when people (especially zelda fanboys) watch Zelda videos, its better to stick with what they know, also at the beginning put a "Click To Continue" I sat through The entire song (which is pretty good, link it or something) until I noticed that my mouse button was telling me a clickable is there. I also suggest using photoshoped versions of the medallions that are at the beginning button, I kinda noticed they looked too funky... also if you get to a point... Please dont referance any of the cartoony versions of zelda, I have no clue how they sell so good, but they are shit... the gameplay on them arent horrible its just... they butchered the game, could have done so much better.. but yeah it was a good attempt, work on the animation, and run it through a few times until it seems smooth, also watch the blur on some parts.. looks corny, also I put a few too many alsos in here...
Thats my honest responce.
The decent rating is in hopes that you make a big improvement on the next one, I wish you luck
DARKRYAN responds:
THANKS. (^_^). THE WHITE B.G.'S YOU SAW ARE FIXED, SINCE I CHANGED THE SETTINGS FROM 550 X 400 TO 550 X 300. AS FOR CLICKING, I DON'T KNOW HOW TO USE THE PRE-LOADERS, YET. XD. I AGREE THAT IT'S A GOOD SONG. IT'S ACTUALLY CALLED THE "RAZOR SWORD," THOUGH. I HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM, ONLY MINE'S "AS FOR THE...." XD. THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST CRITIQUES. (^_^).