Needs more work

A short flash. The joke is indeed funny, but the voice acting needs more work. Especially the edit on the first line sounds very strange. Sounds as if you added the word "fly" to the file where you said "I'm going to".

The graphics could use some more work as well, they look very rough. I think you just need to practice a bit more and you should be able to create decent graphics soon.

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Hmm, it wasn't good, man, you just made the same drawing with a mouth shaking and the first guy moved his head... I don't know why you made this, but it doesn't have a message, and it doesn't mean anything... Just a man who wants to fly and an Earth picture moving to the right, you didn't use your drawing skills, you just made something senseless...

The end wasn't nice, the two guys died... I know you can make a better job, man, use you criativity... I know you have better things to show NG...

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Roger

Just ugly

-The lip-synching was off a little which is most likely becuase of how slow the words were actually being said. It's an easy fix if you just practice it a little.

-The animation was just basic and with practice can also be improved. You only had parts move one way. They weren't very dynamic.

-The story was very short and needed to be a bit longer in my opinion. Just work out a solid storyline and make an animation off of that.

-You obviously have potential since you have some skill at drawing already. Work on your overall animating skill and audio incorporating and you'll have a packaged deal.

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Well there's not much to say about this but the audio was ok but the lip syncing was off a little bit and the art was very basic but I saw some potential into this thing but it's really too short for me to review at all but try to make the animation better and better artwork from maybe other artists but I couldn't really hear go really well but I guess you kind of tried on this so I gave you a four because I'm nice but please work more harder on your stuff!

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~Joshsouza~

Kind of basic.

Not every submission is meant to be a work of art, so I'm not going to really say much. The pictures were solid, if somewhat blocky, and the animation was really quite choppy.

The voicework sounded like something from iMac. I'm assuming you used some kind of program that I'm unaware of for it, but it made the voices quite robotic, and I couldn't even hear "God's" voice properly.

The set-up to the joke was decent, and the punchline worked, though I'm afraid I didn't find it all that funny personally. Still, you have a good sense of what's funny, which is always good. Practice with animation some more and find a different audio program, and you'll be alright.

-Xanatos
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