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Feb 21, 2010 | 9:34 AM EST

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--EDIT: Play and Replay buttons have been added. Enjoy!--
--THE REST OF THE AUTHOR'S COMMENTARY WILL BE UPLOADED SOON--

Nate: I spent weeks on this Flash, and I learned how to Motion Tween. How does it look?

Reviews


JVARTAJVARTA

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 2, 2010

Crit

Lookin' good! Nice overall composition here, with a full story told from start to end. Great attention to detail such as in the backgrounds. Something simple to do, which can make a big difference here would be to add some eye blinks every once in a while (very easy, in your case you could actually just throw a line in between 2 open eye keyframes to make a quick simple blink.) Overall great stuff, I like the ambition for being such a young gun! Keep it up ~ jvarta.com



tman67tman67

Rated 4 / 5 stars February 25, 2010

I wish I had an iphone !

Great job, as you continue your journey with flash you will create many a wonderful
animations, keep doing what you are doing. You put most of the kids I go to school with to shame !



MrOldWorgenMrOldWorgen

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 21, 2010

Okeeey

Quite entertaining. Needs a replay button at the end and a play button at the start. Nice flash though, Goodjob.


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NateVarmac responds:

Thanks for the review! I don't know how to make replay buttons, and the Flash seemed a bit too short for a preloader (I don't know how to make start buttons either), but I shall take that into account and learn how to make them.