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Well here's my second Phoenix Wrong. I was going to make the sparta remix longer, but It didn't seem to fit with the rest of the movie. Hope you enjoy. Also, if you like it, why not recommend it for the Phoenix Wrong collection?
hmmm...not done yet.
Be more original with your gags/jokes.
It wasn't bad. PW's should be longer, around 5 or 6 minimum. My biggest problem is all three of those skits have been done before (although not the same way). Infact, that 'WTF boom' thing is probably the most over used one off all. I've seen it like 10 or more times. Keep trying, you just need more original ideas.
Not to great but i like it. You need to make it a little longer though.
beginning was funny enough, but the Sparta thing is a little overdone. keep up the good work though
A short film about a park bench
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