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READ FIRST: Please click the edge of the play button: it is broken i am mentally handicapped i will reupload this! thank you
its not that bad actually, its ok but who is really expecting much from a title like RANDOM
please be kind it is my first
it's me mathys/matthaios from FaceWAN! :D
Anyway, it's good for a first one. My first uploaded flash got blammed somehow (Yeah... I really can't imagine...) xD.
LOL you should try uploading it again i want to see it! :) thanks for checking it out!
there is random......
and there is RANDOM, posting meaningless stuff is not the best idea. but this is your first flash? for a first attempt, the animation was ok, the drawing and art could use work but you will learn in time. all you gotta do is keep drawing, try drawing things you see and eventually you will get better.
overall for a first attempt this was good, the animation was fairly smooth, could use some work but again this is your first and you will learn but for a first attempt this is good. in time you will develop you skills further and get better and better ^_^
(Just so you know, your dealing with a person who has no flash experience). Its...good. Though it needs work. Its not really random as I thought it would be, but it shows you know what you're doing. Keep practicing and you'll be a pro in no time. :)
wow thanks! actually it took me some trial and error to get the preloader working as well as the file size adjusted right but i am working at it! thanks for your support!
That's all I can really say about it; it's not bad. The art could have been a bit better, the music wasn't really my thing (but I can't downgrade you on that), and there didn't seem to be a message in place of a story. Although it is called 'random', presentation isn't everything in a flash; substance is also required to add weight. Nice effort anyway!
good song, ok animation. Could be a bit smoother. Keep it up
thanks!! im just sort of messing with the flash quality settings in order to reduce file size :)
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