...kind of hard to be nice about this.....

however at least three things worked that I care about.

1 the thing plays...unlike some flashes on newgrounds
2 there was music, although a little disturbing but it was there.
3 it ended and it began, no repeating stuff.

however even if it is a prequal or what have you it still seems unpolished, not even a once over look. hope this turns into something nice.

It needs work...

I'm sorry, but...you really need to work on your flash skills. Might I suggest looking at some tutorials?

Nothing really... much... at all?

There is barely anything at all. Please work on it if you are being sincere.

absolute

garbage.