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The Secret Life of Bees

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rated 3.00 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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nikola
lifeofbees
superslavic
beelife

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Uploaded
Feb 16, 2010 | 10:40 PM EST

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Author Comments

Hi, how are you? Well what to say... this is one of my first flashes that i made for a small school contest with the help of close friends and family. It was a lot of fun to make and draw and i hope you get a laugh out of it :).
Also thanks to Alix1, Lord Craven, and Jakejosepheternity for the awesome music

p.s (sorry for the bad voice acting)

Thanks everyone for the encouraging and helpful reviews. Your advice and tips have really been insightful for my future animations. Thanks again you guys rock!

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axl-ryderaxl-ryder

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I'm not understanding the low score here.

it wasn't bad, but this at least deserves a 3.00 Decent animation, some attempts at humor and a fairly well put together movie. That's a lot more than can be said for most submissions on this sight. I think you did a pretty good job, keep it up (I honestly would say it's a six, but I'm putting an 9 to help balance out the score)


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NewgroundSageNewgroundSage

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cute simple little short.

This flash animation isn't the greatest thing in the world but you have to think of it logically. Flash animations usally take time and somtimes even money to produce, Your classic telling about bringing rights, equalality and a end to monarchism was a a pretty good leap for beginners. For inserting this little short upon this site let me compensate your time with a fair score of 8/10 and a 4/5. I hope you'll begin conjuring up more flash animations in the near future, Keep up the good work and never give up. I wish you a fantastic day.


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roguetworoguetwo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

hmmm

you need to have more movments it seems like there stones and there mouths you need to do somthing about that it bugs the kell out of me but good story.



vectoplasmvectoplasm

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice esp. for beginning work.

When I read it was a beginner's work, I was thinking, 'here we go again,' but it was good!

It shows you gave a care about backgrounds and story flow. Not to be overly scientific, but in bee society, the males (drones) never work, they just sit around and chill. The way it should be ;)

As far as sound, I'm no expert, but getting a good microphone should eliminate the awful hissing/humming quite a bit. I bought a Blue Snowball mic, big improvement from my cheapo Logitech. You can also use your current software to fade out of audio clips softly so it's less jarring. You can go crazy with sound quality measures, but these two steps will help.

Keep it up...


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AllBlueAllBlue

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

its ok

its too long though and drawn out. you'll lose your audiences attention unless you keep it moving at a steady pace. the art and animation or ok but nothing amazing. and audacity is great for recording voices -- it must be your microphone that's not good.