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Feb 16, 2010 | 4:48 PM EST

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This was my very first thing in flash.

Reviews


HxrmnHxrmn

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 16, 2010

Increase FPS + more frames

This is cool but I think it needs a higher frame-rate and more frames of animation.
It's too choppy and fast.

Also I think it needs a play button.



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 16, 2010

Hmmm notbad

This was notbad, a good idea of a poem on flash onlything i thought it could be improved on was that, it was just text all around, adding abit of "ANIMATION" wouldnt hurt and may make it more enjoyble for others, just an idea though.

Needs more then just the text, nice idea though

~X~



CoadyBrosProductionsCoadyBrosProductions

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 16, 2010

great poem!

it needs sound effects, music, or narration to seem right, though.



shadox1shadox1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 16, 2010

Not brilliant, but...

I like it. Could do with some music.



deatndeatn

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 16, 2010

too fast

The text moves way to fast for people to actually read it and take in what it is saying