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This was my very first thing in flash.
Increase FPS + more frames
This is cool but I think it needs a higher frame-rate and more frames of animation.
It's too choppy and fast.
Also I think it needs a play button.
This was notbad, a good idea of a poem on flash onlything i thought it could be improved on was that, it was just text all around, adding abit of "ANIMATION" wouldnt hurt and may make it more enjoyble for others, just an idea though.
Needs more then just the text, nice idea though
it needs sound effects, music, or narration to seem right, though.
Not brilliant, but...
I like it. Could do with some music.
The text moves way to fast for people to actually read it and take in what it is saying
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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