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Well... It took a while to do this for me. It's my first flash so please be gentle ;)
Here's part one.
.. ITS SHORT
I CAN'T MOVE...............................
Didn't like having to look for the button every time there was a new text. The text was kind of hard to read. You might want to put them out of the way of the animation itself with a background to make them stand out more.
The animation was ok as far as manipulating all the objects and what not.
Good interaction and story flow.
Looking forward to you growing and applying better interface and applied animation techniques.
I like the whole mario concept but there's things that are off for example one mario does not jump that high neither does yoshi,. It was a bit short and it honestly was not funny in any way. its like watching stick figures do the same thing over and over. you should add on. give it a stronger story line and add more humor. maybe slow the music down a bit. other then that good job for your 1st flash. leep it up. pratice makes perfect
It's a bit unsteady for a sprite flash, and very stiff. You made it ovbious that they were mostly tweens and their movemetns were realistic because of it.
Still for your first time, it's not half bad. I would recommend you research audio compression though, as not only was the music loud, it's a large file size. There are tutorials that can help all over the web. You migth as well look up others that might help make your sprites more fluid in motion =)
GL on your next submission.
Yeah... I see what you mean.
Thanks for the tips. I'll try my best!
The likeness of the movie is just like in the game. Really wish I cud play Mario like that!
btw I'm not really sure but, you got the spelling of "boss" wrong. Or maybe you were mentioning "booze"? I don't know.
Good luck with part two!
Well i actually meant boos as in multiple ghost.
Well thanks for the review. It means a lot.
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