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Hello everyone, and thanks for checking out the new epsiode. In this episode, we introduce some new characters and to move the story further along. I hope you enjoy it. And please remember, comments and helpful criticisim are all apprecieated.
Good work but really lacking. Nothing happened except dialogue and a few flashy lights. The voice acting was great.
Alright, well congratulations you have me hooked on your story and I would really really like to see more. However I hope you take my review into consideration because I only hope this gets better and better! Ok here we go:
Writing: The one thing I enjoy most about this particular series so far is the writing is very well done, and it keeps it entertaining ( don't slack behind! ) Keep the writing fresh.
Voice work: Was fine, however still think some of your voice actors should use a better mic!
Art: Art was there, really well done and you will just keep getting better and better at it.
Animation: Here is where it needs touching up. I like the animation in all four of these so far, however it feels as if you are kind of rushing? I guess you could say... I say that because too me it looks like every clip needs more "In-Betweens" then it has, to make the motion more fluid.
Another big thing is that I noticed were two scenes.
The Silhouetting scene and the chef scene.
The silhouetting was done fine, just their needed to be more background art to really to pull of that look. When the chefs came out at first, I thought that this film was unfinished or lagging. It was the same clip about 6 times... try to switch it up and not totally cheat your animation!
But seriously, please keep making more! This really can be good!
I liked it, keep up the good work :) more old guy
Good voice acting and animation! Some minor tweeks like the sound quality. But a very nice animation overall.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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