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My first flash, took me 18hrs.. a bit short i intend to make it longer but then i got bored and busy i had to end it rate and vote.
Short, but a little humorous when the guy falls. Visuals are pretty good.
too bad it's unfinished, because its really not bad. the animation is good, the colors nicely indicate a certain atmosphere. And the joke is a little corny but not bad.
But it ends there, the animation would be nicer if the foreground wouldn't just glide over the whole. The joke would have worked so much better if it had more build-up. And adding stuff like a reload button and a preloader just really adds to the complete-ness of a submission.
Great potential, pity you did't give it more time, busy dude.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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