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SPRITE HATERS AND NARUTO HATERS YOU ALL HAVE THE RIGHT TO GET OUT AND EAT YOURSELVES!
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SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVEMENTS ARE WELCOME
it was good but...
sometimes you could see that the sprites weren't exactly in the same place as the frame before that, and it was little short other than those it was good
Too sgort but was notbad.
Ok so first off this is notbad at all, i really like it, and while it didnt "SCORE" very well it was a good start and better that its your first works, As for the "PLAY" screen you had the play button there with no real logo so if anything is suggested you should present a logo of your flash, also the "VIEW-SCREEN" seemed abit small, make it larger with some more platforms so they are like jumping and fighting all around, will have more visuals of alot of stuff going on, just an idea to work on. Ad More "EFFECTS" like with the backround scene, you could ad some running water for the waterfall or something, and when they are fighting you could have some more "BLASTS" that jump out making really fancy making the whole flash dazzle, just another idea that will improve on this, try it out, The flas seemed "SHORT" so make it longer with more characters maybe even more scenes not just the same one, just really go all out on this battle and have them go differant scenes, So i enjoyed this little flash of yours but it could use some improving as explained above, anyways good job, hope to see improved versions sometime.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a logo at the play menu screen would be a start, a larger viewscreen, more scenes and most of all more widespread effects.
A good battle seemed too short though.
i made a mightier version of this flash about 2 mins long and with a lot of special effects v-cam and all but i lost the pen drive which contained it.if i can find it i will give all the newgrounders a visual treat.Anyways thanks for the review
Good quality for a demo, but I agree that it is too short. Also, Neji wins??? Whats that all about?
ummm ok i guess
but can use some touch ups, in other words too short
But its AWESOME!!!!
thanks man ty very much
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