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My first flash so it's very very ugly :P
this is pretty good for you first. i agree wit VvvV
A very nice first.
I really enjoy this. Your future animations will probably be much nicer and more complex.
Aw thank you
I have to say though.... I have no idea on how to make it not loop ^^;
It's not bad at all
Plenty of face expressions and interesting body movement so I would agree with user Kaspotcho and say: go for something more complex not in terms of animation but in terms of plot and music.
eh not to bad
it seems pretty well animated for your first work. Try something with a plot and sound and Im sure you'll do fine around here.
well i like it
it's short, but it doesn't matter cause it's your first.
i think it moves very smoothly, and the style is good!
i donät see anything bad about this :D
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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