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Hey everyone! I know I haven't updated for a while, so I present my new flash: SARCASM MAN!!!
Please enjoy, I spent a long time on this. :D
If you have anything helpful or encouraging to say, please post it in the reviews V
I openly accept criticism.
Like others said, the credit reel at the middle kind of ruins it. A lot of people missed the better part of your animation probably.
Aside from that, the second half of this looks a little better than your other work. The mouth movement actually looks a lot better this time around and the animation is clean like usual. I like your art style; you would make a good dark comedy if you gave it a go.
Keep working on dialogue and syncing it to the mouth movement. That's probably your biggest problem at the moment. You could work on cleaning up the audio and adding ambient effects to make the voices sound more natural. Beyond that, you could start doing more complex animations like fight scenes or something with a lot of movement.
Anyways, good animation. 5/5 10/10 (more like a 4/5 8/10, but you deserve a bit of a higher score than you have right now).
Thank you. :)
Jack, Jack, Jack, Jack, Jack...
Rule #1: You can't put a credit roll halfway through your flash. Most people see credits and hit the X button. I'll bet that at least half the people who reviewed this never even saw the last half. Don't do that again.
Aside from that, it was pretty good. I still don't think it beats Tales of Deep though, so I'm going to continue the trend of giving you 6's. If you want the 7 or more from me, you'll have to earn it.
Oh, you do have a point there. The credits roll as the intro credits as some of those super-hero cartoons do, so I bet that's half the problem (with the other half being not enough sarcasm...)
the animations were fine
and so was the story but it wasnt proprerly thought out, nor was the voice acting. no emotion at all, you have room to improve but i still like the concept
Sounds like something I need to work on. Thanks :)
i ilke how you made it look like a comic
t3h 5uck.... m3h
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