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This is my first try so understand I am willing to hear the jeers so let me have it and i will take all it and keep trying
Add thanks for the tips and nex animation will be done better thank for the tips
I get this animation nice for the first attempt
i dont understand it.What is the meaning?What the fuck are you tryin to say???Fix that next movie.
Frame rate and Animation.
Pretty good for a first-timer.The colours were quite well done,but you'd have to improve on animation and frame rate.Alot too.
I had an animation rejected before,so I understand.Mine was no colours and frame rate problem(cause mine were only black and white).
Keep trying and improving.I'm sure you'll be a pretty good animator.
I've given up as an animator,so I don't have much tips to give you,sorry.
It was great!
I hate fat fucks that compare your flash to stuff like Tarboy or something. You're not as good as me, and I suck ass, but your far from the gutters...
As for advice, I'd recommend you let your animations be a bit more fluid, and make more sense? Unless the purpose of this animation was to leave me confused, you should fix that next time.
A short film about a park bench
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