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Feb 13, 2010 | 12:26 AM EST
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NOTE: This is the full animation! So you don't have to watch part one, it's included in this! Just click the 'play the movie!' button. It's named 'part 2', but it's really the whole thing.

Glenn gives Annie a drawing she likes, winning over her heart. Annie spends the rest of the day trying to coax Glenn into romancing her. All he wants to do is draw, though.

This is the entire animation as it was meant to be seen! It's a whopping 13 minutes long, so don't watch if you don't have that much time to spare. I updated the first half as well, rendering 'part 1' obsolete. So if you haven't seen it already, don't bother, it's included in this. (unless you want to watch it anyway, to see what's different between the two versions or whatever).

Hope you guys enjoyed this, I spent about 9 months-ish working on it (of actual work, anyway), so I hope it pleases! Happy Valentines day!

EDIT: Thanks for the front page!

Reviews


DaggerfireDaggerfire

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow

Unique, odd, crazy, COOL! I like it! A very interesting animation. 9 months well spent!



S4cr3d-Cr4pS4cr3d-Cr4p

Rated 2 / 5 stars

It was good, but there were some flaws

First, I'd like to say that your use of angles is good (though somewhat excessive, almost to the point of dizzyness), your drawing style is good and your animation is good. There are several areas in this, which are not so good:
1. Music: Really, really painful at times. I would seriously recommend getting someone else to do the music. It just didn't suit the piece.
2. Pacing: Much too slow. The entire plot and message could have been conveyed in 1-2 minutes and your story would have been far more effective for it. You don't need to show every detail of every character's actions, movements or emotions.
3. The characterisation/voice acting: The grunts got really annoying and were far too obvious. You can get a hell of a lot more meaning from non-verbal communication than: "I'm annoyed" "I'm happy". The part where the girl did a series of motions to convey something before they entered the restaurant was so unclear that it was almost comedic. I didn't empathise with any of the characters. Also, if you are going to use proper words, use them throughout. If you want to do the grunting thing, do that throughout. Don't have characters who do both.

Overall, I think that the problem could be that you are overthinking it. Try to simplify your ideas and I'm sure we'll see a massive improvement. I'm looking forward to seeing something that takes all of the advice into account.


Bobert-Rob responds:

Well, I actually like it for its length. I'm really not the kind of guy who likes stupid short animations, so many other people do it that it's maddening. I'm sorry you didn't get into it, but I wouldn't change a minute of it. I did everything according to what I thought would be good, and it turned out well in my opinion. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the matter, though.


TheManofSteal13TheManofSteal13

Rated 5 / 5 stars

At last!

I remember seeing this a good while ago, I never got to see what the end was going to look like. Finally, at least I get to see it completely! AT LAST!


Bobert-Rob responds:

Hell yeah. I do what I can! :D


thepetergriffinthepetergriffin

Rated 5 / 5 stars

thanks for maikin a new flash bobert :D

damn it its great



NeilErvinNeilErvin

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Easily

The best sun ever. Your animation was fantastic! The plot was very well written too. I hope to see more work from you! :)


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Bobert-Rob responds:

Oh, you will! Eventually. You guys got lucky, since DSR was finished and this had already been finished for a little while, getting these two long entrees in a row is pretty uncommon for me. But I'm hoping for another summer release, at least! Thanks for watching!