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Teeny and the Cloud

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rated 3.14 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
silent
cloud
teeny
tanning

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Feb 12, 2010 | 2:16 PM EST

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Author Comments

"Teeny" is based off of a doll I got when I was really little (a Kennel Kuddlee). I never outgrew using her to create weird and goofy stories, and when I had to do a Flash project of some short story for a college class, I came up with this. Sorry for the shoddy Flash work; I'll try to do better in the future! =)

Reviews


MarkSWMarkSW

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good work

very simple but the graet nevertheless..
bg music is funny, I liked it too :)



AlajamschAlajamsch

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cute, Funny, and Short

Very simple, very short, and certainly entertaining! The animation was quite smooth, and the art style you use is very suitable for this sort of project. I enjoy how you leave us with nothing but the cute Teeny and her shocked expression as you can hear a heavy storm ruining her perfect sunny day on the beach. Keep up the good work!



zbox101zbox101

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Failing

Your movie is ok, but there are a lot of places for improvement.

~First, you need more shots. For example, when grabbing and throwing the coconut, perhaps go into first person view of the dog doing it.

~The music shouldn't continuously loop through the whole animation. You should change it up or take away all noise to add to a moment (like a changing shot).

~When the dog looks sideways, it looks weird. You should show its head from the side.

~To show the cloud is blocking the sun, you can add shadow on the ground where the dog is lying down.

Now, there are things you did well.

~You have a play button and replay button.

~You have music and sound affects.

~ The flash quality (except the dog) was good because of the type of flash it is. It reminds me of a greeting card, if it was different, I would expect the water in the back to be moving, and the sun to be more detailed, and wind to be blowing the palm tree.

Overall it is a decent flash. Maybe next time you can make a longer one with a story about the dog being adopted from a kennel and making a family happy or something.


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