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The official video of Mark Ruff Ryder's Jack the House.
You missed the years of amiga.
Amiga ruled back then with their powerful intros, based back then of hardware that is less than 10% of the power we are being supplied today... Compared to these real authentic intros, it is a less than a let-down...
You must see the original cracktro's showing it a pure & nostalgic awesomeness.
As a Retro-addict I found it as an insult or a joke in it's most severe case:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fPSst2 0JEcE& - Spaceball - State of Art...
Here, Learn something, these who watch this animation. 20 years, much smaller byte-size, less advanced technology and such an awesome result... Amiga Owns!
4 for your pathetic attempt... Offensive joke.
good, could be better
it's good. had great alien concepts.
would be nicer if it was just focused more on the dancing., the parts where people showed up on it were actually rather annoying, as was when the 16bit art showed up. stick to just one art style and it will make the whole video much nicer.
Also don't use photographic backgrounds. they work in some things but for something like this it really takes away from it all. either draw your own backgrounds or maybe think of something else. it looks like you just googled images and used them as backgrounds.
would love to see this redone in a more polished version, with the changes i just suggested.. the animation was ok but it was too jumpy.
The music was great though too repetitive
The animation was good but a bit oddly made and used
The theme was....well I don't know what to call the theme
thumbs up for entertaining flashing colors that kept my attention
and for the attractive females
nice but somewhat lacking overall
It was strange
Your work is so much different that the general public can understand and grasp completley. mayne people watch awkwardly at the style you present, with the gigantic boobs and the sketchy animation. The characters all move jumpy and strangly sometimes, the live actors of littlew kids seems to be far to out of place to enjoy. Finally, you need to choose a different guy to work for because this guys music isnt that good. Also, your perspective on the human body is a bit off but that is just your art style and I love that ahaha.
Now that the bad is out of the way, lets move onto the good. The coloring was great, the pixelized clips were really cool, i enjoyed the nice variety of characters and dance moves, you worked really hard on animating everything and that was clear, the special effects were neat to look at, andfor the most part everything was quite smooth.
If you want to appeal to the public, which i doubt you do hehe, then try to make your characters realistic in line and depth instead of sketchy on the outside. I know you like the hentai aspect, but it was unescesary for this video, especially since a little kid is featured in it which is REALLY awkward to watch because the hentai turns the viewer on, and then the viewer sees your little girl dancing. Do you really want your daughter to be looked at by perverts? Think about that clip man, just saying.
I know you dont enjoy criticism, but im just being honest man. Thanks for posting this to newgrounds, I wish it was a bigger screen though, which would not increase the file size by that much really. Good luck with your future stuff!
And hey, i dont deserve credit for this ok. All I did was give u some code for effects.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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