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Feb 10, 2010 | 8:32 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is my 5th or 6th animation I have posted, hopefully the first one to go through! If you have any suggestions or opinions, please let me know, Also, sorry for the bad text in the credits.
Here is the story line, He is on camera, his objective is to nearly get hit by a cab.

Reviews


dailyderekdailyderek

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

LOL Not bad but one major issue,

Actually two issues, and they're not very major. Hah. To start with the good news, it's well animated, shading looked ok, very colourful although quallity of background wasn't great looked good, very smooth animations which I liked. Problems were that is was hard to understand maybe due to lack of expressions, scenes or dilauge resulting in lack of humour. Other problem well it's only kinda a problem, ahah, umm every newcomer to flash knows from the start SFX are important. They make half the enjoyabillity, epsecially ifyou're aiming for a cintamatic effect. Which you werent here but I'm just simply noting that, anyway, SFX is good but only if it's fitting. I recognized the Counter Strike bomb difusal noise when the guy opened his eyes, hahahah! Good try jsut make the plot easier to undertsand and get more fitting sfx.


alafraga responds:

Well, I usually animate stick figures instead of people. I am a newcomer the that genre of flash.


cyberrampagecyberrampage

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I bet this is on everybodys mind...

Why is there a pizza in the sidewalk?


alafraga responds:

It is lifted concrete.


XyphienXyphien

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good for a newbie.

I personally don't animate, but I can sure tell you are getting better at this! Keep it up!



nuclearstickman5nuclearstickman5

Rated 1 / 5 stars

It was alright

too short tho