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I thought it was brilliant
Hey, dont sweat it. I have a profound respect for anyone who I feel is a better artist than me. Not to say that 'spoilerhater38' didnt have any logical points because he's probably watched enough anime to know what hes talking about. But I know potential when I see it and you have a hell of a lot of potential. That first guy Dossfllm needs to go have a marker shoved up his ass or something so he could have some color back to his personality. But any way, this animation was great. which is why Im going to ask if you wouldnt mind helping me out with a project. Its an anime series that I have writing for a couple of years but I havent been able gather the skills to make it happen for real. I have scripts for six episodes so far and charcter drawings and bios for each character. I cant pay you much but I am willing to give you full rights to the series , I just want to see some of my ideas put into action. I would greatly apreciate it. Thanks, and again congrats on a great animation.
I'm going to try and do this as politely as I can.
You're like a thirty year old man who never learned to grow up. Who believes every childish fantasy they come up with is something memorable and unique but is merely a motif of their favorite cartoons. You're like a free thinking parrot, citing others as your own. The fact of the matter is You never get better. Now I'm kind of ashamed of myself because sinking down to you're level and criticizing this piece I'm merely giving you credit and the satisfaction you don't deserve. I wouldn't ever do this to someone but I've been watching your shit since middle school. In middle school, it was fun, it was down right fun. You had your own series or whatever it was all anime based, which is cool... In middle School. I'm a college grad now hoping to get a major in timed based media, and I come to this site for inspiration from time to time, being the place that inspired me to doodle. Doing the math I assume you're probably older than I am and have surely been working longer and harder at this flash game for who knows how long. Why don't you sit down and make something worth watching. Stop mimicking the infamous anime that happens to be popular at the moment - and make something of you're own. Seriously, time to grow up. It's just like watching you're bad ass uncle from your early years grow up to be a drunk and wife abuser. Anyway I'm going to go reevaluate my life for even writing a serious review of this bullshit - because it wasn't worth the time. It's just the internet.
Hopefully you'll abandon this naruto crap and make something worthwhile. Good Luck.
the start was brilliant
but it just felt as if you got lazy in the end because the animations stopped fitting the background. be like VALVe and say "screw the timeline we're perfecting this"
This flash seemed more of a parody of eraly anime in english.
Cool flash I guess.
You're almost there, just a little further!
Animation wise, this was either great or poor. There were some parts where the characters moved naturally and it looked very realistic, but there were some parts that were very poorly made such as when that one person is lying on his back and reaches with his arms up there was no animation for the clothing on his arms.
Story wise, absolutely nothing was given away in the grand scheme of things and that's a real let-down because there's so much mood and tone in this.
VO work could have been better and it can be tough to find the right ones for each part but it pays to be picky.
The quality of the video (not the movie as a whole) was an immediate turn off and should be the first thing dealt with. You're just so close to being a very engaging narrative, just add that extra bit of polish and you've got something special.
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