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We would like to thank Crossabre for his character art and animation contribution, and Edwyn Tiong as the SFX provider.
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yet another win cant wait to see the next 1
dude under me stop bein a hatin dick it was cool
stop hatin dick it was cool
terrible and cliche
This is one of the worst anime rip offs I've seen. Poorly animated, poorly thought out and poorly executed. It plays like someone took all the worst anime cliches and animated them together.
The animation itself is pretty terrible, it's just plane bad. The drawing is abysmal and it would be quicker to just reanimate and redraw everything because of how many glaring errors it has, the hands, hair and head being the biggest offenders. Perspective would probably be a good thing to take a few classes in if I may offer any advice.
the story itself is just a giant cliche, and rips off elements of Naruto, I'll say nothing more about it.
also, the voice acting, dear god the voice acting. I couldn't tell the female's VA's apart, and all the dialog felt wooden and clunky.
Overall this is pretty unwatchable. I liked the premise of the Xin Series, I didn't like the animation or the execution, but it was at least enjoyable. This is just bad.
I am well aware that criticism is suppose to be "useful to the artist". I know the above isn't, so I'll offer some advice. Take some classes. Learn to draw, Learn to write, learn to find voice actors who aren't terrible. Lord knows there are quite a few here on newgrounds that will do things for little to no money that are much higher quality than the ones you have. Other than that I don't know what to say.
I like how there are no big explanations. Just enough so you have an idea of what's going on. Some of the art need work though, especially that top view scene. I thought they were standing in a green field. Turns out it was a forest clearing. That's pretty bad.
A good start.
Every good series I've seen always seems to end at the first or second episode, then I never hear from it again. Either the artist abandoned it, or something else happens that causes it never to be finished.
Let's hope that isn't the case for this one. ;) Don't let me down man!
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