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take your dog for a walk
AND HERE IS WAS NO.1 JUDGE XIDIOUS SCORES YOU
Music is very misleading so music excluded and the flash was only judged.
fucking amazing awesome and very story nice work good
Worst thing i have ever seen In my Life.
So. Lets start by addressing your NEGATIVES, which pretty much covers the entire board:
(-) The text flying everywhere.... What the Fuck....... "FDSJFBJSDFKSDHF" "ABR BARK".
(-) Horrible Animation. The dog had BLUE & PINKTEETH.. SERIOUSLY. And what the hell was up with that Person [Looking-Thing]?! A Four year old could draw a better person... I've personally saw one.
(-) The MUSIC! WHAT THE FUCK WAS WITH THE MUSIC? IT MAKES US WANT TO RIP OUR HAIR OUT!! It fits attrociously with this theme, and not to mention its bad quality (sounds like something im listening to from a seperate room, damnit)
(-) The Text, again. When the "dog" object moved, you had the shitty text move along with it. All movements were boring, tweenish, and unrealistic.
I don't believe this deserves any Pluses because of how you treated the reviewer Below me, but then again you NEED contstructive Criticisim.
(+) The concept could have been alright, but you FUCKED IT UP VERY BADLY WITH YOUR RANDOM LETTERS (NJFKDNSKJFNS!!NJNKJS!! BAR BARK PWN), AND HORRIBLE MUSIC AND ARTISTIC SKILLS.
Summary :: This doesn't deserve to be on here. Fix it up, if you'll even bother, with the following
*Better Animation (No simple, unrealistic, tweenish movements like you did..)
*Better Music (Seriously, what the FUCK was this shit you call music?)
*Better Storyline ( Wow... What the hell was going on in this monstrosity?)
All of this is constructive, and not directly offensive. If you don't agree, thats your problem. I've done my part, now its time to do yours.
Turd of the Week? . . really?
Honestly, I can't believe this actually made it into the portal at all. As for constructive criticism, since this is suppose to be a HELPFUL review, I'd say, maybe, don't make a flash with a dog that has blue teeth and text flying everywhere like 'ASGHASDifsdnfksDFASDF' maybe?
Congrats on the (rather stupid) award.
It could have been better
I find it strange how this was considered an "informative" flash, as I did not seem to get much information from it. I guess the song wasn't terrible, but it got a little annoying. I have seen worse animation, but it's definitley not high quality. I would suggest putting on things like more colors and a background. The random words that flashed on the screen got a little annoying. I guess I am glad I was introduced to a new song, or at least one I don't remember.
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