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funny animation made in adobe flash cs4 and i really like the elevator song also please comment nice because this is my 4th flash video EVER! so ya...
It Is O.K. ....
Here Are Some Things You Could Improve On:
Maybe Make A Background
Make The Mouth Match The Voice
After The Frame On The Preloader When It Says Play, Add A Keyframe And Put In Your SoundTrack Then In The Properties Select Start And On The Last Frame Select End Because It Repeats.
Maybe Some Better Animation
And Some Better People.
Other Than That It Is Good.
I thought the concept and humor was good. Still needs a lot of work, but I think you have great potential here. Different voices would help, as well as making sure the animation and speaking are in sync. As far as stick animation goes, it wasn't horrible, but it could definitely be smoother. Also, a good background would be nice.
Hope to see more from you, keep it up!!
It obviously needs a LOT of work. Volume increase, different sounding voices and it sort of has that Japanese monster movie quality where the mouth and speaking aren't in sync. But the randomness is always funny in my opinion and at the end it showed that you weren't exactly taking it too seriously... which is good. Like, Krazy-Rex says, needs a background too although that seems a little less important than the other things I mentioned.
All in all I'm giving you a 10, taking into account that this was probably your first try and that I am trying to counter the undeserved zero this recieved.
Hope you do more.
I heard all the dialogues
It was funny. It made me chuckle a little. You need to improve alot.
* Make the sounds volume high (I tuned my speakers all the way up to hear it)
*Real character with colour and posture
*The mouth and the voice should match.
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