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Made for education purposes
Nice for a beginner...
If there existed a collection on newgrounds for beginners, this would defenitly be there... Anyway, since this is your second submission, you must be at the beginning, and under that pint of view, there is a lot of work to do... Anyway, it is best to show the progress, than to hide it, to allow others to see and evaluate the progress you make.
Drugs are bad mmmkay?
I give it that the consept in this flash might apeal to those people from the United Kingdom but to those of us from the rest of the world, it doesn't make any sense at all. The combo of poor flash skills, crazy slang and incoherant speach make this a horrible cartoon. Please spare the world your feeble attempts and cancel your existance imeadatly, preferably with a large calaber gunshot wound to the face.
The humor you used probably fails due to incoherency in the audio, and the fact that most of the people on NG still live with their parents, and take a lunchbox to school.
That being said, the animation really distracted from what you were trying to do.
example: one second we're talking about interrupting monologues, the next, a random barney is floating across the screen.
It's a bit hard to follow.
Animation and graphics look like it took you probably three seconds to do. The voice acting was loud, obnoxious, and often too incoherent to even tell what they were saying. The random objects floating around throughout the flash were not even funny and just annoying. The positives were that if you could pick up what they were saying it had the slightest bit of humor. If you work atleast abit more on your animation and make the voice acting less irritating it might make a good flash.
Until that day happens I give this a one out of ten.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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