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I will make part 2 after my tweening hand gets some rest.
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Overall I'd say that this flash isn't a bad flash but could use some work in a couple of areas. First your graphics weren't bad, not spectacular but nothing to complain about either, that said there's always room for improvement. Thankfully the sound quality was good as a lot of flash similar to this usually have terrible sound or bad clips. Secondly as stated before the plot's a bit generic, of course sincce this is only part one I'm give you the BOD here since you got plenty of room to expand it. Overall it's a start and you might be able to take it somewhere with enough work.
Not exactly bad, but it isn't too great either...
Not so good
Not much of a clock fan but ill give this a constructive review
2 misspelled words not sure if they were intentional or not
Pretty short with a generic plot
Next time make a longer video.
did you sign up just to review this
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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