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Sonic vs. Shadow (Canyon)

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rated 2.03 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Action
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sonic
shadow
fight
canyon

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Uploaded
Feb 3, 2010 | 2:50 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is my first flash animation for newgrounds, I also added "voices" for this flash. Anyway rate it and make sure to comment. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.

Reviews


supersonic1310supersonic1310

Rated 0 / 5 stars

fuck this piece of crap

stupid sprites, stupid background, stupid fight, stupid EVERYTHING!
Heres how you can make it better:

1) Make it longer
2) There should not be a fart at the end
3) Make a "PLAY" button so it doesnt loop
4) Make it less obvious

With these steps, you'll be a pro.



DionteGregDionteGreg

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It made me laugh.

Pretty good. I'm new at this animation thing myself, but for your first time, it was pretty good.


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SilverUchihaSilverUchiha

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Great Start

But you gotta go up from here. Here is some advice:

#1 - Better backgrounds are a good investment for something like this. Maybe an actual sonic-level pic or whatever. But stuff that looks like MSPaint work isn't so good.

#2 - Shadow's last line was cut off at the end. That's a bit annoying.

#3 - Should have just a play button so it doesn't loop.

#4 - (Plot Wise) have some sort of sign Sonic is still there. Leaves it open for a sequel so we can have more fights like Peter Griffin Vs. The chicken.

#5 - Don't cut the voices or sound, just lower the volume a bit, if anything. Course, people can just turn their damn speakers down if it is that big a problem for them. I would even add some LIGHT background music from a sonic soundtrack. If you add music, don't let it overpower the voices (but SFX are okay).

that's about all I have. I think it is good and these few suggestions will just make it awesome altogether. I look forward to more of your work.



RawGreenRawGreen

Rated 1 / 5 stars

I give you

2/5 for your effurts.



FaceYourFearFaceYourFear

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

nice

Sweet bro.... def a good first movie